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Each week there is a Weekly Round-Up where students report on what has been happening in class the previous week. For that writing task, students will be responsible for re-crafting and editing their work independently. Please excuse any mistakes as they practise these important skills :)

Sunday 19 May 2013

Room12s 80 Minute Writing Challenge!


Candy Land

As the plane slowly drifts towards America, The wind starts pushing the private plane. Mary-Jane and Jonathan start to freak out and panic.

Mary-Jane also known as MJ has red,wavy hair that is as bright as a rose. Blue eyes like the sea at night. MJ loves animals and education but she dislikes sports and especially running because it's so hard and boring.

While MJ was panicing, the plane was slowly heading toward the water. Over the speaker the pilot yelled "We're about to crash!" 

Then suddenly the plane filled up with cold sea water  and MJ started swimming to the nearest island with Jonathan. The two of them couldn't believe their eyes! It was candy land! As they got closer they saw life size gumdrops dancing on the beach made out of sherbet.

MJ and Jonathan ran to the forest made out of peppermint trees and chocolate coconuts. Mj walked over to the trees and picked on one of the coconuts and ate the little piece. She tells Jonathan about the place and they both started eating all of the candy around them.

Jonathan went to the massive chocolate fountain and drank all of the chocolate that he was addicted to the chocolate and wanted more!MJ was at the mountains and ate all the cherries and all the candy she could possibly see. The both ate so much that the ate the island and died of hunger and dehydration.


By April, Jani, Jayda, Tyler and Calix :-)     








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