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Each week there is a Weekly Round-Up where students report on what has been happening in class the previous week. For that writing task, students will be responsible for re-crafting and editing their work independently. Please excuse any mistakes as they practise these important skills :)

Sunday 19 May 2013

Banana island

Once upon an island, there lived a monkey called Steve. He longed to be a ninja. He created his own banana boomerangs and nun chucks. He was forever replacing his banana sword. Steve couldn't help himself from eating them. To help him practise, Steve had a very small(but feisty) friend,Mr. Cuddles. He was a mere cat.


That night, Steve and Mr Cuddles were searching for their old friend, sensei tree, He was 6,000,000 years old,deaf,blind,mental but somehow powerful. Later, he found him sleeping. ''Sensei tree! We found you!" Steve screamed.
 ''Oh right,your deaf. LET'S MEDITATE."
 Without another word,they are both meditating silently.


The next morning when he woke up. It was a very big storm! Steve ran up Sensei tree and hung on for dear life, literally. The tsunami was growing and rising. Steve ran and grabbed Mr. Cuddles. He saw a giant coconut. He bounced on a spider web and landed safely into the coconut. But  to his surprise, there was coconut milk inside! So they swam to the bottom and found a big trunk. He balanced it up and saw the island long gone. Steve used the trunk to look every-where. When he looked through, there was a big spider butt.''Ah'' he shook the trunk and it plopped into the water.


A few days later, the lady spider returned with an angry look on her face ''Ah! Do not eat me! You are fat enough already! You don't need the calories!'' Steve screamed fearfully.
'' I am PREGNANT!'' The spider shouted.
 ''My name is Rose. I am truly sorry'' Steve said
''really?'' Rose said hopefully.
 ''Of course not lady! What the heck do you think this is? Titanic!'' Steve said!
The next thing you know,crabs came,opened up roses stomach and out popped the 8 babies. Roses husband Jack came, and told Steve to cover his eyes. ''Spider marriage is complicated''.


In the end, the coconut crashed into an iceberg. Jack screamed, ''hang on rose!'' And rose shouted back '' it matters if i die, but if you die, i was gonna eat you any way.''

But they were never found. Steve, and Mr. Cuddles found a land of gummy bears. Guess who they found? Sensei tree. But that is another story.

TBC

BY Ben, Katie, Gabe, Jared.b, Meggan and Tristan

3 comments:

  1. Well done Katie that's a funny story you should be a author some day keep it up! By kaitlyn!

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  2. Very amusing. Keep up the inspiring writing! Heather

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