Room 12's 80 minute writing challenge!!

The haunted campsite!

Orientation:

It was the year 2013. Max, Veronica, Bob, Steve and Hollie were taking a vacation to a campsite in New Zealand.Hollies best friend max has decided to come on a holiday with them since he was really part of the family.

Bob is the Dad of the Smith family. Bob is intelligent and likes to read books that are 300-400 pages long. Bobs favourite colour is blue.He wears a blue t-shirt, red three quarter pants and black pointy dress shoes.MOST of the time Bob is happy and sometimes he is in a very bad mood.He is 42 years old and he has a kidney disease.

Complication:   

Lake wood lodge camper van site is far away from home. We had our little white and red camper van on the back of our Holden rodeo.

We left home at 9.00 am and arrived at the camp site at the camp site about 1.00 pm. It looked empty.It was very dark,dull and a little bit spooky. It was 1pm and it was dark it was a little bit odd! As soon as we got there we were all very tired and we decided to have a little sleep.

I heard foot steeps tip toeing across the camper van floor. I rolled around to see what it was but is was just.... my little brother Steve sleep walking.

In between the complication and the climax:

The next morning I woke up to see that Steve was missing he was not in his bed. I ran to mum and dad's room to wake them up and help me find Steve. We tipped the camper van upside down to try to find him but he was nowhere to be seen. I walked outside and found an abandoned tent sitting in the middle of nowhere.

Climax:

Max walks over to the tent. He finds Steve's Converse shoes. He looks around the tent for a little while and he finds human foot prints he follows them down to the river and finds Steve swimming. He tells Steve to go back to the camper van.

Max was helping Steve up from the river when suddenly Max falls in the water and hits his head on a rock and gets knocked out he starts to float down the river. Steve was freaking out because he saw blood in the water. He didnt want to tell his mum or dad what happened so he just said"Max is dead".

Resolution:

The family ran down to the river and saw the blood so they believed Steve.The family decided to end their holiday so they packed up stuff and tried to get out the gate but then they saw the sign.The sign said you have to stay forever the family could not believe it.

15 YEARS LATER.... 

My family has been missing for 15 years and I am the only one that survived.

                              HOLLIE xx  

By Kaitlyn, marianne, Mac, Griffin and Michael :) :) :)