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Each week there is a Weekly Round-Up where students report on what has been happening in class the previous week. For that writing task, students will be responsible for re-crafting and editing their work independently. Please excuse any mistakes as they practise these important skills :)

Sunday 19 May 2013

Room 12s 80 minute writing challenge

Past midnight at School

It was a dark, stormy night at Reremoana school. The fog was blocking Lucy's eyesight. The rain was  pouring down on the roof of the school hall. Lucy, Emma and Luke were running around and playing games when lightning struck the roof.

Lucy is a 13 year old, blonde haired, green eyed girl. She enjoys drawing, playing all kinds of kinds of sports, having sleep overs with her friends and much more. Her nicknames are dumb blonde and pineapple lump.

They were playing monopoly when they heard knocking at the door. Emma went to the door to check but a few minutes later she still didn't return, they waited a few minutes when they heard a loud scream, Luke ran outside to find a path of blood leading to room 12. Luke called out Emma's name 20 times but heard no answer in return. Lucy came out to help find Emma.

They found out that Emma was  a zombie when she said "hello friends" then Luke Screamed like a little girl. Lucy slapped him in the face and said "be a man!"

After about a couple of minutes dark figures started coming closer through the fog. Luke and Lucy started backing away but reached a dead end. They started shaking and calling for help but no one answered.

They were in a dark place when the room was lighting up. "The sun!" they screamed. They saw the zombies running for the darkness. All the zombies died but Emma turned back to a human. They all went home wondering if what just happened was real or a dream.

The end

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