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Each week there is a Weekly Round-Up where students report on what has been happening in class the previous week. For that writing task, students will be responsible for re-crafting and editing their work independently. Please excuse any mistakes as they practise these important skills :)

Wednesday 31 July 2013

BJ Sea Story


The beach
Ok i was sitting beside a rock pool listening to the waves crashing against the rocks, sea gulls squawking and the wind whistling.

Now i can smell salty water, sea weed and moss in the distance. Dying fish, fresh takeaways way out in the distance.

I can taste salt, fresh air and moisture.

 Now i can see waves crashing against each other. The sea gulls fighting over a deed fish. The beautiful sun set setting and the clouds going orange. I can see light and dark spots in the water. Sea gulls diving for the fish in the rock pools beginning to be empty by the ocean.

I can feel cold water, hard rocks, slime, sea shells and foam
on my hands and feet.

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