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Each week there is a Weekly Round-Up where students report on what has been happening in class the previous week. For that writing task, students will be responsible for re-crafting and editing their work independently. Please excuse any mistakes as they practise these important skills :)

Thursday 28 February 2013

story

It was a cold and dark august night, no one around. Leaves were flying all over the place. Big grey clouds covered the night sky. Thunder bashed.
 When Beth and Bailey slowly tiptoed into the haunted house and looked around. "Are you sure its safe in here, we should go its really dark and late" Beth said faintly.
"Oh grow up, its fine" said Bailey firmly
Then life came through the wall, the doors creaked and the floor boards flung up.
"AHHH RUN" they both squealed

2 comments:

  1. Awesome story Ella!
    It's short and it has lot's of descriping words!!


    Marianne

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  2. Yeah ELLA... Bob is in the walls of the haunted house...

    Katie

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